could you tell me what i can improve?? and what you didn't like?

there was just a sudden jump and it was so easy to crack the code(YOU DIDN'T THINK YOU COULD JUST LEAVE ME THERE DID YOU LEFT TO ROT IN THAT PRISON A MAZE WITH NO EXIT WELL I FOUND AN EXIT

with grammar: YOU DIDN'T THINK YOU COULD JUST LEAVE ME, THERE DID YOU? YOU LEFT ME TO ROT IN THAT PRISON, A MAZE WITH NO EXIT. WELL I FOUND AN EXIT.
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and as i was saying, its such a sudden jump when the sky turns black and starts playing that music. and also it would be a bit more believable if you could still hear your footsteps in bopimo and stuff. and as i was saying(again) its so obvious you cut off there.

Can you repeat that , I didn’t get it

the text to number site i used does not work with symbols, yeah it was a sudden jump should have had a bit of build up. the code is meant to be easy to crack its not an arg, its more like a horror series. thanks for the feedback ill make sure the next episode is better.